All Comments on 'The Girl'

Very nicely written hope you continue it

Beautifully written, and extremely explicit in describing the various emotions and reactions. I could do with a "prequel" to get eh "back story" for this relationship. Nice to read about the "dom" side of "the girl."

I love this so much. Could you do a back story of how they found her and then a couple of her training and living with them. It's so amazing

I absolutely loved this! You should definitely wrote more parts to this.

Hate her name, but I'll get over it to read more