All Comments on 'Stand for Love Ch. 14'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

could it be possible that Jake dad/adrian dad is adopted or something? could it be that Jake is imposing to be Adrian in other to inherit the company, cause come to think of it you never mentioned Jake family company name yet they are in so much money. So many questions but little answers.

kelvinvictorkelvinvictorover 6 years ago

WOW ... never lets us down!

Tummy getting rounder and bottom getting bigger? Could it be that the Equilinias have the ability to bear children? I think it is pretty certain that he is the heir of the company, but it has to be far more important than just that for his mother to state it in a dream.

What is the secret of the Equilinias ???

Also let's not forget that Vic, Jake and the family are just around the corner and they know about the Equilinias so WATCH OUT ADRIAN ... something wicked this way comes!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good story this guy can write

His stories are captivative,keep it up

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago
wow vanalas

thnx for this luxuriant chapter,so good and interesting

oh wow,,,the last love making scene we missed it,,come on,give us arough one in the next chapter

for sure the last 2 chapters made my blood boil i was panicking at every word after Adrian asked Nick,,Gosh am now scared more coz the culprits are also planning,but i wish my couple well,dont make my Adrianicks suffer again PLEASEEE

OH i dont have more words since u always leave me breathless with perfect stories

i love u,plz post soon my love....Am gona read this and comment everytime coz u're irresistable

oh the themes are songs ar Rude boy-Rihanna and breathless by shayne ward

mwaaaa

kelvinvictorkelvinvictorover 6 years ago

With all of the loveing this chapter I thought the song should be Cole Porters "You do something to me that simply mystifies me."

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

hmmmn,kelvin c'mon even mine can work,isn't it??

kelvinvictorkelvinvictorover 6 years ago

Yours works ... I'm just from a different generation and love old fashioned songs

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

i miss gabriel alot,i wish he spends smetym with his dads

the more we go,the more i panick for sure vanalas is unpredictable,u expect east he brings west THE BEST WRITER

am i rqst next chapter to have rough sex,very dirty words.Let them moan eachother's names

i wish the culprits dont seperate my couple PLEASE I KNOW

they're upto athing,thats why am panicking

thanks for entertaining us,we love u but me muchest

let read it again

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago
"i'l fuck u till u bleed"

wow for sure i miss arough moment,toking dirt'show me what u got nick'

'let me fuck u adrian....' damn thats hot,after reading again...Page 3 made me horny incase vanalas u're here,we would..........(am joking hahahaha atleast in that i can joke with u)

infact,page 3 has its own them song-wild thoughts

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

By dj khaled and Riri

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

Wow,i wish Adrianicks success plz let us succeed,no more splitting

oh thinking about culprits make me panick thats why i dont put them in ma comments,DAMN THEM

Equlinius!!!!!!,Jesus,my Adrian is rich??Oh yeah the most rich couple in Belenia,,ooh i cant wait

GeorgepulseGeorgepulseabout 6 years ago
Please edit.

I am really loving this story and can’t wait to read your others, but please, please, please edit it. If you can’t do it yourself , find someone to do it for you. You seem to be getting names mixed up a lot and a few other things which sometimes makes it a bit hard to follow. I am not being negative here as I truly do love your story.

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