All Comments on 'Maddie by the Beach'

Incredibly sexy story! Made me hard when Maddie asked if she could help. Sequel please?????

you knew 'HOW TO WRITE.'

Where did you find a private beach in Malibu ?

"Uhh...Okay," was all I could stupidly respond. That is the only right answer, you ran out of the water like a scared girl I'm glad you manned up and and got yourself beat off. How could any guy say no.

So will you or have you already asked her out ?

Perhaps you could write about your date, and tells us where she takes you. ♡

I just wrote this story for fun, it's completely fictional so I don't really know where the story goes from here just yet. As for the Malibu thing, I was just casually writing and jotted down the first beach I could think of. Sorry, didn't realize how implausible that was until now lol. Thanks everybody for reading anyway!

That was a short but exciting story....Awesome Job!!!!

Innocent, sexy, enthused!

Well written and nicely paced for a short story.