by IllicitlyDesired
Well written, smooth language that is appropriate to the genre, nice and sensual. I'm very curious to see where this buildup is going.
Thanks for your story. I enjoyed reading it. I can't wait to find out how she got into this position and why the king has developed such an interest. Keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
I enjoyed this snippet of the beginning of Her Stolen Grace. Can't wait to learn more about these two characters.
I would love to read more. Can’t wait to find out what happens next. And her background. And I want Vereena to get her just desserts
Wow, I really wasn't expecting such an amazing response to this! I had submitted just to test the waters really, but I'm truly glad that you guys enjoyed it :)
I will try my best to get Ch 2 and 3 in by next week. If anything, chapter 2 at least.
Thanks again for taking the time to read!
I.D.
I thoroughly enjoyed this read. Can't wait to read what else the king takes from her. Great start. Thank you.
I hope your intention is to continue with this story. I look forward to the coming chapters.
Intriguing story so far, and well written, but -- who is this female and why is she a captive? Maybe in next chapter? Let us hope.
This is a great start. I'm REALLY interested in seeing where you're going with this.
I'm not sure if I want to even read the next chapter if you've already given up. Even though I'm a bit perplexed as if I've missed the back story, I'm still thoroughly intrigued. My only fear is that I'll fall in love with it like sooo many other storylines only to wonder what could have been. It never seems to matter how much praise and encouragement is heaped on so I'll never understand why. If only we could here from the authors even if it's to let us know they just can't continue. I hope you're just taking your time because I think you have something really special.
So intriguing! I love it already. Can't wait to read rest. The King is hot!
wow the king is hot and the spanking ,humiliating dinner and erotic bath was yummy
but levan is hotter way much hotter than the king
why is she not with levan that aloof sexy lord who captured her just in two and a half hour