by DonnasDream
a "warm Saturday night"....with a "February chill".......Good story line with great possibilities, if a bit unoriginal, but needs some work here and there because it takes away any erotic subtlty.
This is quite good, short but interesting right from the start. Good rhythm and pacing. He's not a jerk. She's a nice woman. A nice couple. I hope you let us know soon what happens next.
I love how Always Ready she is! :+))
Another to-the-point sharing!
I appreciate how you keep your stories
to the situation at hand.
Not turning them into an artificial touching-all-positions inventory.
Another hot powerful encounter of a hungry talented woman taking a young virgin lover. The mature lady taking the boy and skillfully draining him to meet her own needs is one of the most erotic encounters of which I have read. Please continue your writing,,,your talent is without limit !!
Had me recall my own virginity lost to a much older family member, related to my mom. In fact incestuous then. She was married to an absent husband and in lust for a young boy. I was privelaged . . .