All Comments on 'Billy's First Time'

by DonnasDream

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oldbugleoldbugleover 6 years ago
Needs some 'continuity'

a "warm Saturday night"....with a "February chill".......Good story line with great possibilities, if a bit unoriginal, but needs some work here and there because it takes away any erotic subtlty.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
*****

This is quite good, short but interesting right from the start. Good rhythm and pacing. He's not a jerk. She's a nice woman. A nice couple. I hope you let us know soon what happens next.

MainefiddleheadsMainefiddleheadsover 6 years ago
his full four inches

She got a hell of a day

MFH

KingCuddleKingCuddleover 6 years ago
Where does Donna live? :+))

I love how Always Ready she is! :+))

Another to-the-point sharing!

I appreciate how you keep your stories

to the situation at hand.

Not turning them into an artificial touching-all-positions inventory.

mert40mert40over 6 years ago
Love the lady in charge.

Another hot powerful encounter of a hungry talented woman taking a young virgin lover. The mature lady taking the boy and skillfully draining him to meet her own needs is one of the most erotic encounters of which I have read. Please continue your writing,,,your talent is without limit !!

Horing1Horing111 months ago

Had me recall my own virginity lost to a much older family member, related to my mom. In fact incestuous then. She was married to an absent husband and in lust for a young boy. I was privelaged . . .

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I'm a single lady with a perverse mind and lots of kinky fetishes. Love big age differences in sex, whether the guy guy is much older or younger, it's always a turn on. My stories contain lots of truth as well as fiction. Hope you enjoy xxx