All Comments on 'Education Reform Pt. 02'

Thanks for the update. looking forward to part 3

I've been waiting for part 2 since I finished part 1, please write part 3, i will be waiting patiently for ir.

Oh my goodness yes I’ve been waiting for a part 2! This is amazing work, I’d love to see a third!

I'm dying to read a part 3! These first 2 stories have been amazing :)

soooo good! need a part three ASAP

REALLY enjoy this story. hopefully there is more coming.

Write the next part also.

I've read your other story as well and over there you also dropped some mentions on how you don't how to keep going with your story.

The reason you're stuck is quite simple in my opinion: you've deleted your MC's personality way too fast. There's no struggle, but there's also no way for her to give her own input.

As much as it can be a bit of a joke to say about this subject, but your story lacks depth. You need something to enrich what's going on, either give your MC some character, or keep her character blank and toss her in an environment that wasn't meant for to be in.

I don't know, you do you. If you're stuck, change something.

C&D

Please continue the story!

I loved your story, please continue!

More please!!!