All Comments on 'Revolutionary Love-His Virgin Ass'

Very erotic story, only wish it were longer, with her period on, it would be nice to read how he reciprocated her pleasure after such a mind blowing performance.

Great Work.

Thanx for your comment. It's interesting to read the feedback on what is a new experiment for me- writing erotica. I am torn all the time about the length of these stories. I've written some longer "back and forth" ones where the sessions include them both "doing one another" and then some that are more like "quickies" such as "Public Blowjob" and this one. In this case, it was about relaxing Borya and getting him to sleep. I am also always drawing on historical fact/personality traits and actual quotes. I keep all of this close to the vest when I write to keep these characters realistic (including day to day realities like being tired or being on one's period so the characters are always "real") while crafting sexual adventures for them. Anyway, I have stories planned that are going to be even more adventurous and will include other people. Thanx again!

TrotskysGirl

I was about to cum... just from reading this!!