All Comments on 'Dirty Dreams'

I loved this story, very erotic and well written. Thanks

Good work, AugustRose. I don't normally browse this category, but I enjoyed your sexy little story. Putting on my editor's hat, I suggest working on varying sentence structure and looking for ways to use more active voice -- instead of "I was enjoying," you could write "I enjoyed."

That said, thank you for posting, and I hope you have more dirty dreams to share.

I had a similar dream the other night but reading this was way better.

it would have been better if he had used lube and cuddles ,spooned her after instead of sleeping on his side