All Comments on 'Write It Down'

i love your stories, though i would love to hear more about this one. did they get back together in college or is this the end of the romance for them? would love to see a part 2 to this.

and like days...they too must end, TK U MLJ LV NV

Yeah, yeah, I get it - "Write It Down".

However, that continuous 'Inseption' nonsense in its third act almost turned a sweet coming-of-age story into an annoying turd. Thank for the finale goodbye, to bring it back into sweet.

I hope JimBob ain't going to discard those characters, and we'll have a follow-up for this story. I really like Todd and Becky, and hope again't hope they can somehow make it work... although, if there's a sequel, let's it solely through Rebecca's perspective - as I said, I like Todd... but man, were his fantasies starting to be annoying!

And hopefully, by then, the kid will learn to password-protect his laptop when he's not near it... dumb noob.

Nice. Hard to track, but nice. Hope Rebecca forgives him when they get to college. And he seriously needs to set up the password on his computer.

All past and future positive props for this story go double for me. I especially like the duality of mom's married boyfriend. He steps out on wife ( might have good reason ) but helps out the sidepiece son over and above the call of duty. Small touch but spicey.

Full marks * * * * *

it seems you like to have every thing hanging. slap hapy papy #9

I hope Becky made it out to college as well.

Love all your stories please write more.