All Comments on 'Slow Seduction of My Indian Mother'

by YamiMalik

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Ffantastic

This is an amazing story with so much potential !

Please add Anal sex in later episodes if possible !

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A nice start

Continue the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
continue story

Great story def continue it

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good story

I liked it, only change I would make is to stop putting words in parentheses. Hurts the flow a bit. Otherwise a good start to a story.

YamiMalikYamiMalikover 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the comments :)

I am working on part 2. There won't be any anal in that but I am hoping to do an anal scene in the future! Sorry about the square brackets anon, I couldn't think of an easier way to show the translation of the hindi text.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Once again GREAT WORK!!!

After your Dinner at Mami's house and MUM please releive me, i was awaiting for something new. And here you came back again with a BANG...

Awaiting for next parts of this series.

Also, can you please add one more feather in Dinner at Mamis's house.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great Story

I really hope that you continue this wonderful story for all of us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Great story for sure. Please continue. I've been hard twice reading this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Quaity

This has great potential!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

amazing build up... please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Yes yes yes

Please!!!° go on

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Glad you're writing again - don't abaondon Please Relieve Me

I like this story ok and if you like it more, continue it. I would prefer you continue Please Relieve Me, especially with anal play - her on him, or him on her.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Yes, please

I loved your last series and flooded my panties when I saw this on the New list. Please please continue. Your writing makes my nipples so hard. So difficult to find such good content with characters from my country. Kaash ek din aise hi chud jaun main.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Welcome Back

Great start and would love to see other episodes penned out. I preferred the slow seduction of Please Releive Me and would anticipate more stories from that series

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More After Match/Fun on the bed please

This was a great story, and it would be awesome if you could also continue the After Match /Fun on the bed series. Great series and thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Amazing

this is great, definitely continue the story, and perhaps the other story "please relieve me" you are an amazing author.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Good story

Please keep continuing this story and also please relieve me

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
great plot

you have built up a nice plot. i love to read how it will proceed. keep writing, but don't jump too fast.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good

Nice

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice

Nice

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

ok

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Sex with mom

It was to good feel like i was doing that plz published second part of it

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Heartfelt

Very realistic. Lovely

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
do more

please god do more

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
fantastic

Amazing story I have read all your stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Continue

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