All Comments on 'Spanking Party'

What an absolute slut wife (and what an absolutely lucky husband. A well written, exciting and sexy story. Thank you for sharing.

Now your wife, the one you surposedly love so much, has had her complete social and work/business life ruined for this stupid fantasy. So many of the men are married: what do their wives think of them cheating? Do they know yet? How many divorces would occur? Their "close friendships" would no longer exist. This is the fantasy of a retarded cuck and has no bearing on reality. You obviously have never been involved in BDSM either as it is totally unrealistic. Health issues... oh, what's the point. This is beyond redemption and offering constructive criticism is a waste of time.

Good begining, acording with its title, the spanking party promises a,hot story but thenshe becomes a too much sluty wife, too much. Everything would have gone much better if she would've kept in silent. Dirty talk from her wasn't a good idea, she being so dirty, so sluty, so whore ... nop

Just a pile of shit with no thought put into it! First of all std city, divorces galore, doesn't have a wife any longer. Her job will end soon unless and probably will fuck the boss and give them all std's. No way does any woman talk that much during sex, all the guys are well hung lol ...yah sure and the best of all.....he expects her to stay with him after this. It ain't gonna happen!

Fantastic. Loved it.

Goes totally beyond suspension of disbelief. You obviously have no idea what it is to be the Dom in a real relationship. It's the Dom's job to think of the realities and consequences of what's happening beyond the immediate getting of the nut. There is none of that here, just an amateurish attempt at a hotwife/gangbang/something fantasy that I sure as hell hope remains just that.

No still means no, even when it's from a submissive. One star, only because I can't vote any lower.

I really loved this story! There's spanking and fucking! Maybe a little less talking. More fucking

Nothing like a great spanking story, loved it, thanks

I loved to story.

By the way no real Dom treats his submissive like this. Sex slavery is out.

Great story. Very hot!

Well, I got into her level of excitement, but I could never do that with my wife. Men are predators and while complete strangers are one thing, having the men know her and continue to see her at would would be unacceptable.

Great idea, maybe a little over the top toward the end. Maybe stop after the party and have less guys, even a few girls?

Another submissive girl fantasy being used to cuckhold her husband. Still good. Do not like cuckhold fantasies. They still challenge me so I read them.

Semi good spanking fantasy. Leave out the sex. Nudity and spanking only ok. To many males add some females maybe 4 or five couples. Some friends of both of you and some strangers. No coworkers of either of you. This is your story, keep writing. Always edit. Thanks.

:>Like some of the other comments. A little over the top. Husband should nor have been cuckhold. Third base stuff, spanking and the BJ's ok. No fucking. Add some girls. No co-workers. Mutual friends only some couples. Girls like to be "tops" as well. Good work keep writing. 3.5 stars. I liked using the bedroom, blindfold, restraints and individuals by number. Have her strip in front of the group then add blindfold and take her to the bedroom. Cameras a good addition. Thanks

What MAN shares his wife, really???

The husband is a willing Cuck, so cuckold should’ve been added to the tags

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