All Comments on 'Belated Birthday Present'

All this build up, a dream in the shower a room full of naked gurls. And suddenly the end? This has to have at least a second part to it. Plus there is the insane teasing drive home at the end of the weekend.

I was going to leave it at that but you make an interesting point. Our guy is now surrounded by naked women and he does have a return trip... I will think about it. Let's face it, given the situation he was probably going to be OK. It would have been better if he could have held on for just a little bit longer...

What's up with all the cliffhangers these days? Somebody write a shemale top/male bottom story I can cum to please....

I wasn't trying to write a cliffhanger! I really wish you could have cum to this. The main character gets railed by a hot shemale and she fills his ass with cum. I tried my best!!! Do I need to come over there and bang you myself?

I liked it. I think it deserves another chapter if you dont mind.