All Comments on 'Teasing Tormenting Teens'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
EXCELLENT

I absolutely LOVED the story and hope there are more chapters/stories to come. The details and storyline were incredible and definately NOT mainstream/ordinary!!

Messiah of CatchersMessiah of Catchersover 19 years ago
FAN-FUCKING-TASTIC!!!

Absolutely super hot! A wonderful tale about all that is desirable about healthy young women including how MUCH we desire them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
write more like this

do more stories like that makes you feel like you are there the whole time

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I can see them

Oh yes I can just see those sweet teasing teens and their cute little panties.................. thanks for a hot story Mom.

CLASSnKINKCLASSnKINKover 17 years ago
Don't we wish!!

I'm sure there are lots of mothers out there who have that feeling on a regular basis. Only hoping their daughter is as understanding, lol!!!

Great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Absolutely HOT......

Being a bit older, how about another story of grand mothers in similar situations...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
sweet

awesome story!

could there posibly be a story about the mother's dream/wish cumming true?

just a thought

email: dom.4.fun@hotmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Good

Really good, but I hope you accentuate a submissives need to be so in the future. Again really good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Wow. The first page was absolutely amazing! No complaints at all... but thats IT!? After that huge tease and THATS the ending we get? What a waste of time....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
TRY to think of reader

When you write a story try to think of how the reader feels only because it makes it easier to put an ending that makes the story great.....your endind was a letdown buTt keep on practising........:)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Tease

You're as much as a tease as those fucking teens. I was expecting the 2nd page to be as long as the first but you give me one measly paragraph? :(

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
another chapter is in order

Please do another chapter

gotranegotraneover 10 years ago
HOT Beyond Belief!

You've simply got to write a sequel to this! This is as the title indicates, hot beyond belief. She has got too, at least, take another trip, whether to the mall, or the waving Mother's house! Now that's a thought!

MaryAndersonMaryAndersonabout 9 years ago
Inventive and well done.

The temptation to do a follow up to this story must have been tremendous, but you left it just right.

zazrix9zazrix9about 6 years ago
i would have

cum hands free.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
My favorite story on this site

I wish you had a series on DeeDee and her friends teasing their mommies nut never touching them. Knowing that they have their pathetic masturbating mommies wrapped around their fingers

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More

Please please please!!!! More!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Good start

I would love to read more that daughter could make her mom do many good things are not so good maybe the ride home she could force her mom to be nude are make her do something for all the girls!

PatheticJamiePatheticJamieover 3 years ago
If I was a mom

This story feels exactly how I would react if I was a mother

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

It's time for more , it's pass time for more of this story .

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