All Comments on 'The Logan Street Mom's Club: Lisa'

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grayge37grayge37about 6 years ago
You wasted my time!

What a load of CRAP! Pick a new hobby and give us a break.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
empty

The writing is quite hot, but this genre requires tension and character development. Simply describing an orgy and saying that those present are mothers and sons doesn't make it work.

SissyEllaSissyEllaabout 6 years ago
Hot!

Great stuff, made me cum hard! Adore how submissive the moms are, would love to see more gangbang stuff involving them

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Hot

I thought it was pretty hot! Would love more!

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 6 years ago

Hot concept! Hopefully future chapters will be longer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
loveit

Wish I was one of those moms please tell us my

spankfunforspankfunforabout 6 years ago
Amazing Story!

I Enjoyed Every Word! Their Sons Have No Idea Who Got The Best Deal Here! How About Some Recreational Spanking?

BAD BOY BILLBAD BOY BILLabout 6 years ago
Pure Fucking Trash

This story was pure fucking trash..I LOVED IT

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Love it , Wish cum true.

Reading it was like I was there too , Have done it with my son too

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Loved it

I have to say that this story was short but a great read. I hope to see more about this club

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Just a weak-ass rip-off of Ahabscribe's 'The Slutty Soccer Moms Surprise'

The original had build-up, tension, an actual story, multiple vignettes and story-within-story moments, and the sex is much, much better described, while this is nothing but a throwaway, single-page orgy scene. 1 star for being so derivative it's not even funny, and for being too short to be worth bookmarking. 2/10, try harder next time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More please!!!

This was SO hot and erotic! Will there be more chapters? I certainly hope so.

TexasTim806TexasTim806almost 6 years ago
More please.

Your story was very very hot! I enjoy the genre and your story line. I would like to read more from you. Will there be any more chapters?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
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fuck, the fags really got to you, didn't they, sweetie?

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