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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great Story.

I really enjoyed your story. It was really hot. I look forward to additional chapters on regarding this erotic story of a young guy and older woman.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Please

Please continue with this couple. It was a great story and I'd love to read more. Maybe some anal or she cucks her husband or invites a girlfriend. Would be great if they fucked outside in or by a pool. Please write more

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 6 years ago

Would love to see a second chapter where she cucks her husband.

ThatBoi21ThatBoi21about 6 years agoAuthor
About the cucking and extra chapters.

Extra chapters will happen, don't worry! I'm having fun writing this, and I'm glad you guys like it a lot.

As for cucking, it will happen. Just not in the next chapter. I just don't know how to do it and what I want the effects of it to be just yet. But, it will happen.

amoroneamoroneabout 6 years ago
Loved your story

Thanks for a very erotic story. Your description is superb. I have one question; how does a nineteen year old youth who is intimate with a forty five year old hot mother hold on to his climax for so long?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
MORE!

Hot story,would love to see more but I think it should just stay with more of this for a couple more installments then slowly build to either involving others or even cucking the husband if that is your chosen route. I just really want to see some more of the sneaking around secret fucking and maybe the young guy continuing to make her say degrading things about her husband and how much better he is than him to get her addicted to him. Keep it up & Good Luck

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Hot & Fun

I really enjoyed this story. I would like to read about Jennifer and James sneaking around some more for a few more chapters. Not only at Jennifer's cost but also at James' too.

STARBLACKSTARBLACKabout 6 years ago
great

great part 1. you could add an anal angle to the story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great scenario

I loved it! It reminds me of when I was 18-19 years old and wanting to fuck my hot neighbor in her naughty devil costume. She was almost TOO hot to believe! Thanks for writing this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

when is the next storie

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
SWEET

Nice story. Husbands who get complacent and wives who need passion.

More please!!

HowVeryTattvaHowVeryTattvaalmost 3 years ago

Looking forward to the next of your cheating wife stories. Excellent!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Looks like Jennifer Doesn’t get much attention maybe some one should be paying more attention

to her nice Love story RW

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Looks like Jenifer should get loved a couple times a day instead of once a month her husband can’t keep her satisfied. She needs her pussy ate every day. Looking forward to the next cheating wife story. Five stars RW

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Jenifer is getting her PUSSY ponded and ate to orgasm by her young stud.

Racerman1969gsRacerman1969gsover 1 year ago

Pure BS! Just once I’d like to read a true believable story on this website.

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I write smut with a plot that normally isn't too deep. It's also normally about women cheating on their husbands. Hope you like my stuff, and I'm always open to suggestions and criticism.

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