All Comments on 'For Master's Sake'

Story should be continued.

The end with the text is intriguing but you really need an editor to help break up those needlessly long paragraphs.

I have a grey cat named Ash and she follows me around everywhere, always staring at me. Now I'm really creeped out.

I liked where it was going but it was a huge chore to read. I don't want to discourage you but learning to phrase a story into appropriately sized paragraphs which each contain a clear idea to move the story forward is vital to the craft of writing. But keep working at it! ;-)

great.