All Comments on 'Bonnie Lavigne Ch. 04 - Ringed'

I like your writing and details not so sure I like him it always makes me sad for the girl when treated like she's nothing and I read the stories like this one hoping for so show that she's more.hope that made sense

The sensory deprivation box was a nice touch. It was time for Bonnie to be pierced. This continues to be a nice, detailed depiction of a bdsm relationship. It is clearly mutual as the slave loves it as much as the Master.

Not when he’s mentally conditioning her/ brainwashing. I didn’t read this chapter barring a couple of lines.

This is just a sicko on an ego trip. I sincerely hope that this is just a fantasy in your head because a real human being doesn’t deserve this fucked up shit.