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All Comments on 'Sexy Revenge'

by VirgoPisces

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
ending sucks

You do know the category right?

chipcarverchipcarverabout 6 years ago
Excellant

Don't know why the person that said your ending sucked. You hinted a couple of times that she wasn't gay. Having said that, your ending fit in right with the rest of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
What's up with the name change?

Great story, could've honestly been extended, but I feel like the name "Manda" and "Mandy" was confusing me so much nor did I actually get off because it kept switching from Manda to mandy. Pick a name and stick with it.

AnonymousWriter244AnonymousWriter244about 6 years ago
It seems she will go back for more

That's an experience that if she likes it she will repeat it. What I don't know is about Mandy, is she a pissed off drunken straight or a pissed off bi girl?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Exposed ..........

Him at cheater ? Whats that ? Card game ? Couldn't read anymore ......Cretin

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