All Comments on 'Mrs. Clarke and Her Masseuse'

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TryingnottoquitTryingnottoquitalmost 6 years ago
Excellent!

Very hot. Well written.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Super Hot!!! FIVE STARS!!!!

Please fix the one star because I cannot; incredibly HOT!!! Keep writing and Thank You!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Grammar

Sorry, when you repeatedly say masseuse (a female) instead of masseur (a male) it is jarring and detracts from the flow.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great story!

That was quite a read, loved it! Well done, looking forwards to more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great read

Really good!!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Badly in need of an editor.

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