All Comments on 'Hit the Showers'

Good enough for a first attempt. Could you write something longer?

Love Michael and Ian, and they are obviously keen on exploring each other. Hope this was just the beginning, and that they will get together in a bed or on a couch and go at it again. Ian should return the favor for Michael! Sexy many times over!

I love the slow burn of your story. two young guys unwilling to admit to each other their attraction and afraid of the reaction such an admission would bring. But they get there in the end; more please.