All Comments on 'A New Friend Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great pre-amble!!

SO many opportunities...enjoying Ella's total experience, and then her friends, and having Ella leave the meathead, and hook-up with James and show him her dominant style...with him and her friends... Keep up the great writing!!

ElvisOmarElvisOmaralmost 6 years ago

Fantastic. I look forward to more of this kind of story. Thanks for sharing.

katestylekatestylealmost 6 years ago

Interesting, and well written too. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
You did'nt look like yourself...

...because you weren't yourself; rather, you were a new person...you were now a MAN! That's right; she made you a man!!!

YOMEYO

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
not convinced

is this a romance or a stroke story? it doesn't read as a romance.

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