All Comments on 'Give Me Your Tongue'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Confused

He was fisting her and during sex she wanted to be on top because of concern of his cock size. His dick is bigger than his fist? Quit reading after that

SomethingInTheWaySheMovesSomethingInTheWaySheMovesalmost 6 years ago
I'm confused, but I've come up with three possibilities: First, you're tripping. Second, English is NOT your first language.

Or Third, there are actually SEVERAL different people writing this story but none of them can see what the others have written.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

There is no way a lawyer would possibly speak so poorly. The conclusion that I came to is that you are not very old, say maybe in your early teens. You need to learn how to write complete thoughts in more complex sentences. I could not finish this story because it was driving me nuts.

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