All Comments on 'Loosening Up Bk. 03 Ch. 13-16 - Growth'
by SteveWallace
- 4 Comments
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoLoosening Up Bk. 03 Chapters 11 & 12 (Thank You for Fucking My Wife & Guests) have been renumbered and posted AGAIN as 13 & 14. They have the same titles and are word-for-word identical.
SteveWallacealmost 6 years agoAuthorYES, I SCREWED UP CHAPTER NUMBERING. I refiled 9 to 12, because first go around I missed 9 and 10 because they were mis-numbered in my file. Sorry for the mix up. The corrected '9 to 12' should be up and 9 and 10 are new. I picked up with 13 to 16 the way they should be, but that did repeat two chapters. My regrets. I had hoped to get it before any of you caught the error. // SW
Tailakaalmost 6 years agoYour story is a 5*. If it wasn't so good, I might sweat the small stuff like miss-posting chapters!
Anonymousabout 5 years agoPg 4 has Emily whining about being the only woman who hasn't had the big "O" from Dave, but pg 1 begins with her getting this service. Also, Donna had a threesome with Owen and Sean around ch 11 or
12, instead of "getting to know him" in ch 16.
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