All Comments on 'Visit of the Apprentice Pt. 02'

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Jedd11Jedd11over 5 years ago
I say again

Yet again, I love the story, love the characters, love the buildup. And I hope you continue to develop the story. But at some point in, and it doesn't necessarily have to be soon, but at some point, there has to be some wicked hot monkey sex. Otherwise, this could be stuck on a sci-fi site. Still a five for now.

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