All Comments on 'FUTA Pharmaceuticals Ch. 01'

by mrbiscuit

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jmkuehnjmkuehnover 5 years ago
Nice opening.

This was a very promising start. I hope you continue. My only suggestion would be more details about her changes. Did her pussy close up? Did she also grow balls, or did her clit just grow to the listed size? Other than that, keep going.

PilotMoonDogPilotMoonDogover 5 years ago
A good start indeed

I particularly like this theme. I especially like scenes where two futas penetrate each other at the same time.

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 5 years ago

I agree with the other commenters, a good start on an interesting concept. Lots of potential with this concept.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Please pop out the 3rd chapter soon

This was bad ass, had some bondage going on and mixing a medical theme into this takes it over the fkn edge! Like hell I want to see the animation or play this as a damn game! Big props to your style! No matter what any one says, don’t let it keep you from finishing this all the way! Got me fkn hot over here, 3500 miles away from my partner and I miss em even more now reading this.

Rapier875Rapier875about 3 years ago
This is yet another unfinished story.

If don't like to read 6 chapters only to be left hanging without an ending, then stop reading this now.

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