by praeceptor
You have a good concept with this story but I believe it could use some more content to fill out the scenes more. Seemed a bit abrupt.
You do realize that women do not grow hair on the top of their head any faster than men? Also, women generally have long hair because it is choice and not genetic. So why on Earth would this guy suddenly grow long flowing hair just because he turned into a woman? In reality, he would have a woman’s body with a guy’s hair cut.
You had access - in the interest of science of course to a pair of tits like that wouldn't you abrupt!!