All Comments on 'An Apt Punishment'

How about revenge on ALL of them?

They shouldn't have been allowed to get away with all that crap.

Some sort of REVENGE is NEEDED!!

This story sounds so made up it is not funny, SORRY!

well written, could use some sex.

I don't understand why a person would stand for this type of punishment! I'd fuck them up!

Seriously what the hell was wrong with them. Obviously this was made up because in real life, the girl would have never ever stayed with an ass like that, or taken pictures. I would have stripped the girls myself and stolen their clothes, husband as well. And used the clothes to dress myself. Take a few pictures of THEM, how you like me now!

I like the premise of your story but found the execution of the writing to be distracting as well as the general incredulity of the plot. I wish there was a more fleshed out conclusion as well as perhaps some possessiveness displayed by her husband, I.e. him being very handsy with her. Also I would suggest adding some visual description of the characters probably through comparison. I.e. I could see why she wanted to be more covered up and not remind her bf that her breasts looked like a child's compared to mine, if I let her borrow my suit the bottoms would fall right off of her slender hips.