by Paramour28
Kind of feel like Lexi...got all excited to see what happens next, only to realize that chapter 2 isn’t posted yet! Guess that’s what happens when you click on something labeled “chapter 1” while browsing the “new stories” section haha! (This is thoroughly intended as a compliment!)
Great start, good main character development, great tease to close the chapter!!
Interested to see what happens with the sister/former roommate that’s coming to visit. Not personally a fan of the incest side of the incest/taboo category so hoping the brother/current roommate sits out any developments with the sister/former roommate...but don’t let random commenters dictate YOUR story line any more than necessary.
I may have to break down and finally create an account so I can be alerted when the next chapter is posted!
It doesn't look like it in Ch 1. The poor woman has a very bad day and is bitchy throughout. She hasn't been so much seduced by the roommate as much as her own bitchiness morphs into some sort of entitlement (boyfriend not good in bed, the roommate possibly better in his own arrogant alpha male way).
Fair enough, as a story about such people. I'd be curious to read how all this turns into a romance.