All Comments on 'Response Ch. 01'

Especially for a first story. The perfect balance between story telling and eroticism.

Congratulations and an easy 5 stars.

I really do. Beautiful story how dating with all its nerves and butterflies can turn into something deep and incredibly sexy.

The detail you put in in is exquisite

Thank you for sharing, and please continue writing

... I really appreciate the feedback. This is my first ever attempt at writing an erotic story, so I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it so much. There's more coming. I hope it goes down as well as this first instalment.

Reminds me of me and my special someone.