by litpervgrrl
Again, another hot story. I defintely believe that you have a special talent as this was a great read. Hope to read more of your stories in the future. If even they are not true or even fantasies, the story does not come off as made up or fictional.
A Great read! I could have used just a little clearer explanation of body positioning - at times I had difficulty picturing what you were describing.
haha, I loved it. The ending was epic. I love how she thinks that after like: "Oh.. waaait.." XD
I'll admit that the language the girls use isn't exactly my favourite, but the story itself is well written & the ending is the perfect little twist.
I think I have a new fantasy to share with my wife... Thankyou!!!
I found it pretty comical. I felt that he meant her being "raped", but then that seems to have slipped her mind until the very last moment. Nice writing, good characters, hot story :) 10/10 would recommend
Very poor grammar, couldn't figure out whether Audrey wad a male or female or the narrator was a male or female.