by missmetomorrow
Seriously stupid. Get an editor or stop writing.
1 star is too many
DragonRider55
It's different and sexy. Keep working on it.
Loved it 10 Stars. Anxious and waiting!!!
STUPID
one star was pure rape story not into rape.
Great start! Just move this story and the following chapters to Non-Consent/Reluctance to get rid of these negative reviews.