by CaptainNinnin
I like the idea, but I think it would be better if you got someone to edit it. The beginning was kinda weak. Don't get me wrong, Chloe and Gal would be hot as hell.
When changing character dialogue, use a different line. Simple 6th grade English class curriculum when learning how to write.
Beautiful. Please consider making a story about Anya Taylor-Joy dominating Zendaya. Or the mistress thing with them, would be so good. Please.
Sweet!
Would love a story like this with Brie Larson and Tessa Thompson, would be so hawt!!!
Sweet and Hot.
Would enjoy a story very much like this with Zendaya and Anya Taylor-Joy, now that would be so hawt!!!
I always imagined Gal Gadot and Brie Larson in bed. Why not have Gal get a new mistress in Brie, please. Would love to see you write this story.
Gal Gadot with Margot Robbie or Scarlett Johansson in bed would be the sexiest and the best! Please write them!