All Comments on 'Don't Cum in the Babysitter'
by Imyourdaddy2nite
- 10 Comments
Anonymousover 5 years agoWas a bit rushed.
Has the makings of a great story but there was no depth to it
Anonymousover 5 years agoNice concept, but you could have and should have stretched this out for a couple of chapters to entice the reader and explore the characters more.
Tigr2over 5 years agoSo many ways you could have extended the buildup. Or left out the last paragraph to continue with the story.
Anonymousover 5 years agoToo short.
Idiot, you had a story, and you made a flop
Continue, jackass
Anonymousover 5 years agoWhy do some many stories turn weird by calling each other daddy, slut and bitch!? If you write a good heart story, that is not necessary
Anonymousover 5 years agoThis was far too short to achieve the erotic intent of the website's name.
Imyourdaddy2niteabout 5 years agoAuthorIf you think the daddy talk ruined it, that's probably because you never fucked a girl well enough to have her call you daddy.
Anonymousover 1 year ago"Dear anonymous
If you think the daddy talk ruined it, that's probably because you never fucked a girl well enough to have her call you daddy."
Wow, angry retort... you have issues that need resolving
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