All Comments on 'Space Police Corps Ch. 01'

I will forgive you, if you chose to get drunk again, if you write more of this story.

Please end the story before significant liver damage occours.

Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please, Please write more of this. It had me in stiches.

That was great :) editor missed some small things but the story is hillarious

That was cool funny story.

Add some a little more erotica, and it could be one of the best stories on this site.

Get Drunk agian, and write some more

DAVE

I am sick as hell, feel like I am dying and I read this and forget about being sick I am laughing so hard. This is outrageously funny and should end up on an HBO comedy show.

As Lincoln might have said, Find out what he drinks and send all our authors a case!

oh lol lol lol....lovely....u must write more of this.

parodies r just as important as sarcasm.

ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ,why the HELL is it so wayyyy down the charts,more more n more please.

very good, more on this subject please

I absolutely loved IT! I could not stop laughing. i'm waiting breathlessly for the next chapters.

I could not stop laughing! If it takes you having toget drunk to write some more on this story go for it. I can't wait for the next installment. An absolute joy to read.

I hope you decide to write a sequel to this. I laughed my ass of reading it.

More!

I love this story, and I'm going to pass it on please ,please PLEASE write more to this. It's sooo funny.

I was blushing and laughing my ass off at the same time.

tHIS IS BETTER THAN THE PERVIKAR SERIES MAKEM ORE I DEMAND WE ALL DEMAND MAKE MORE ATWAT DO IT NOW

You my friend have a gift. Humour&satire is not an easy category to write for.

Reading this not only makes me want you to turn it into a series, it makes me wonder why you didn't try this genre before. You rock at it!

While I like your other writings, please keep this genre active in your submissions too.

Sincerely,

- JT

Excellent stuff. Great balance of fun and frolic.Kev G

What a refreshing change of pace from the other sex stories. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it and hope to see another chapter sometime soon.

fuckin hilarious

GO TO RAMMING SPEED!

Oh god, there were so many jokes I this I could barely stop laughing.

Great story so far.

Thanks

Now that is FUNNY !