All Comments on 'The Night Before Graduation'

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ValendonValendonabout 5 years ago

Mighty brief, but full of promise!

I'd love to hear more of these two as their friends/lovers relationship develops. Echoes of my distant past!!!

Kisses and nibbles,

Val

Vix_GiovanniVix_Giovanniabout 5 years ago
Oh WOW!!

This story is ridiculously hot!!! Thank you! What a fantastic ultra-short story!!!

LoquiSordidaAdMeLoquiSordidaAdMeabout 5 years ago
Enjoyed the dialouge

I've been reading the 750 project stories, and a lot of them sacrifice dialouge to fit the limit. I'm glad yours didn't. The playful banter between the two said more about their relationship than twice the narration could have. Nicely done.

Crusader235Crusader235about 5 years ago
Wow

Wow, thank you for this Hot little story! So full of promise, just like their future. Love young Love. Five Stars!

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