by MSSD
Sensual and creative story. I could really visualize the last painting session on the beach and wished I had been on the receiving end of the paint-laden tip of that brush! How about another story set on a beach in SF!
This was sensual without being overt. I loved it from start to finish. I wish Matt were real, and I were eighteen. ;)
Thanks for the juice!
Saucy
Very sensual, very erotic from start to finish... very well written. Your main characters (a buff hung dude and a lithesome young teen) were the perfect choice for holding ones attention! I loved the ending! Will you do more?
Ye Gods, that was incredible. One of the best stories I've read so far. I could almost feel the brush Myself.
Thanks for the paint job..
Catie
this is what I look for in erotica- an unusual juxtaposition of characters, totally believable dialogue, not a single word placed wrong. Thank you, thank you!
For some reason, I've always wanted to try body painting. After reading this story, I know why. Great story.