All Comments on 'Where The Women Are Ch. 01'

The author has taken us on the tour of a young lady's life in college leading slowly up to a collision of two. Liked the story as it ssems so real.

This should be used as a textbook example of how an erotic story should be written. It has it all. Character developement, a conflict requiring resolution, and a satisfactory conclusion that leaves the reader wanting more. It is descriptive enough without being bogged down in minutea,and there are no gramatical distractions. Well done! If there were a higher rating This story would warrant it.

Marvelous story. Very cerebral.

This is an extremly well written story! the charachters and the chemistry and passion build together, building you with them, to the wonderful climax!

Great job!

That is how erotica should be written. I am glad to see that based on the title, we can expect a chapter 2!

Hot and very well written.

Brought me back to my days at a women's college ;)

You go, girl!

can't wait for the audio version!

KR - you are absolutely amazing! What a gift you have for telling stories! You have managed to tap into the source of every man's favorite fantasy! Well done!

Jay

jmilleston@yahoo.com

I honestly hope that you are making a living at story-writing!! If you're not, you should be. I even looked sybarite up in my dictionary and I guess I am one too.

Take care and keep it coming.

Later