All Comments on 'Dolly Dagger'

Very entertaining. Very Short.

Always very hot. 5 Stars

I had to stop reading halfway through, but came back to finish a couple hours later. Anything with that kind of effect on me is well-written, like so much of your stuff is. Explores a different, horizons-altering aspect of the sort of practice my own writing explores, which I'm grateful for. Nicely done!

I just wish it was longer. There's so much potential for a more long-term story!

Could probably use more sexuality and less cuckery

there's not enough heterosexual female dominant stories already, and i didn't really care how this one ended up "actually" being a story about a lesbian cuckolding a guy

That final scene did it for me. Hanging their panties on his cock while they fuck in front of him? Fucking brilliant. I really love this Bad End types