All Comments on 'My Slutty Step-sister Ch. 04'

So I'm 100% sure I've read this before. I didn't recognize the previous chapters but the cheerleading stuff jogged my memory. I don't know if this is just a repost by the original author (though usually they make a note about it) or if it is a stolen story. But I do now that this story has absolutely been on this site before.

The first 2 were ok. Third was bad. This wss total crap. WAY WAY too long and filled with bullshit. I like a little realism or believability. This trash sucked ass. Please don't inflict any more crap like this on us.

Not worth a star

Dragonrider

The brother is just gonna roll over and submit to extortion? Wow. When someone threatens your family, you fight back, not lower your head and take it, as it were.

Other than that, good story!

I am so hard just waiting

Can’t wait for the next chapter

At the very least, the first three chapters were posted about 10 years ago by Pip81. That ID no longer exists, so I presume this is the same writer. (I tend to save stories to read off-line, so I have the URL.) I don't know if this is a new continuation or a repost of Chapter 4 because it's 6 Literotica pages, and I won't read anything longer than 4.

I like the story. Keep the new chapters coming. I have read alot of stories on the website and do not remember this one. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Well, there went what was a good story for three chapters. Don't care what happens from here. Boringly stupid story line.

Brent is such a wuss, This chapter ruined the whole story for me.

Coach Stevens and President Michaels need to be humiliated and erased, so much so that they can only work at strip clubs. Blackmail is atrocious and obnoxious.

Very familiar story line. I didn't see any forward noted regarding a repost. Will have to see where the story takes us.

Totally fucked this story up didn't ya. Seriously was a decent story till this one.

This chapter takes a wrong turn, in a catastrophic way. Too bad the story started strong, then derailed

Didn't see the Stephanie train wreck coming ... And it's hard to "un-see" it now ... Hopefully a return to the fun family frolic of the first three chapters ... I appreciate what you do, and I couldn't do it better ... Just didn't care for the nasty turn ... Good luck!

Absolutely horrid. I hate extortion, blackmail and true non-consent from the very depths of my soul and when I stumble upon it in a story that I have been enjoying it absolutely turns my stomach. Congrats asshat, I’ve completely lost my boner and my appetite for your stories.

Hey, don't worry about what anybody says if they won't put there name on it. If this is where your story led you, then so be it. Nice work so far. Hope ya got one more, tie it all together.

And thank you for your hard work.

Zeke

I've enjoyed the story thus far, didn't see the cheer coach/dominatrix thing coming but I've got an open mind. Definitely different so I'm not mad. Can't wait to see how you wrap it up.

Blackmail, rape, femdom... In a chapter you completely destroyed the story, passed from fantasy to crap very quickly. The "blackmail" of the mom was already borderline, but this chapter is a true killer, totally destroyed the sexyness factor. I just started skimming the rape scenes, can't even call them sex scenes.

My comments on Literotica stories are few and far-between, so I'm not bothering to get a user ID for sake of one comment. Thank you PIP80 for taking the time and effort to put this story on Literotica. Thank you, but you destroyed whatever enjoyment I might've had with chapter 4. I could read only to partway through page 3, and could take no more. I'll not be back. I liked the flow of the story through chapter 3, but then then you ruined the ride. You blind-sided your readers with an unpleasant plot twist that I, at least, did not like. Were it me, I'd replace the non-consent element with seduction. The domination aspect could still work, though not my personal cuppa tea. The second 'Anonymous 06/14/19' called it, "the Stephanie train wreck," (they're right) and asked for, "a return to the fun family frolic of the first three chapters." I couldn't agree more. 'Anonymous 06/15/19' called you an "asshat," but I think that's a bit over the line as it's your story, and you can do anything you like with it, but the rest of us don't have to like it. As this is the only story of yours I've read (you may have posted others off of Literotica), I have nothing to compare it to, and I'm trying to keep an open mind, but if this sort of thing is common in your writing, I'll not be reading much more of it. Thank you again for going to the bother of posting this, and good luck with your future stories.

Just because some people are bitchin about the plot twist, please don't stop writing this story. I've loved reading it. Keep up the good work 👌👍^•^

Please keep going with it

This has been such a HOT story. Are there crazy twist? Sure but who cares. Please just keep writing this wonderful series.

just finish the story i am tired of reading stories and not finishing them

Just make sure the Coach gets her come uppance and gets in trouble herself without taking the others down

I love the story, mainly the siblings, but also the mom then the coach. Actually, I loved this story when I read it a couple of years ago also. WORD FOR WORD

If you are copying someone else's work, shame on you. If you are republishing your own story under a different name, please finish the damn thing.

Should have just taken the coaches cameras and hard drive, tied her over the back of her chair, spanked her and gave her a good, hard ass fucking, dry of course, with that big dick! All the while videoing her and making her tell what she had done in detail as well as to who all else she had done it to.

Or better yet, just take all the digital stuff, search the house all weekend for any other evidence from previous crimes, then take her downtown and sell her to one of the pimps that gets his hoes hooked on drugs then slave trades them into prostitution slavery in other states, moving the hoes around. Fitting end for an evil bitch.

I really like this story but don't really like the twists in this chapter.

Loved it all the way. Saw it years ago on the Pandora website and now here on the old account. Would love to see it finished, please and thank you.

literally the second i read to go to her house, i was thinking "go buy a small recording device just in case"......that's what i would've done (her trying to blackmail you with sexual acts for chearleading position is enough evidence for police to make an arrest - esp if either one of them is a minor)

hell, take down the other lady that lets it happen too......if nothing else, plaster it on news (go tell story to local news person and bring lots of bad publicity to the school and maybe an investigation).......do the same thing she did though, "last chance", then walk away

Nice read, but we need an ending.

It's been over a year since chapter 4 was published, you cannot leave it unfinished. We your readers need it to be finished.

How can you torture us with 4 great chapters and just leave it ?

Take mercy on us and write Chapter 5 - please !

Rapier

Please wrap this up. We are entwinned with the characters. Please and Thank you.

Don't make it spoil by adding dad to this. Just make another one for that with mom and 2 aunts. Brent take coach as slut and all women live with brent with juicy parts.

I agree with the comments, you can't leave your readers hanging. This one of the best series I have read in a long time. Hopefully you are reading the comments and give your fans what they want and write more of this wonderful story. Well done 5 stars

I like. Please finish the series.

Another dang 'edge job'!!!

Dang, I wish we'd gotten an ending to the story!

Loving the story ... You can add so much more ... Someone has to get Stephanie and the Dean back😋😋😝😝😋😋

Loved parts 1-3!!

This one, I stopped on page 2. Why the hell is everyone so stupid and not get pissed? I'd have thrown the coach out before she even started, and then would have recorded the dean.

How far from reality can this get? Congratulations- you are like the most of the other writes of incest. Turning the characters into degenerates.

I was enjoying your story until you introduced that "Coach"

Did not see the bdsm tag

Didn’t like that

Good series so far, hope.you come.back someday and finish it lol