All Comments on 'Leftovers'

by LittleBrain

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great story!

Well written and very nice to read. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Telling.

A beautiful romance about love and that love transcends all. *****

bigbob2406bigbob2406over 4 years ago
9

That was very sensitivity done. Good story, thanks.

cybojicybojiover 4 years ago
Well done

Not my cup of tea, but it was sensitive to the theme. 5

laad4e08laad4e08over 4 years ago
Loved it!

It is too bad they had to go through a suicide attempt but, it was loving and fun otherwise.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good stuff

Really well done. I'm a fan of your work

Interesting that you chose to translate english words for the American readers, this must be frustrating.

Love to hear your thoughts on why you think this is necessary

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Amazing

Genuinely the best story I've read

ThePregnantFemboy03ThePregnantFemboy03about 4 years ago
Kinda relatable

I share my name with the protagonist and have a soft spot for trans women, so this story was kinda relatable.

Anyway, you definitely know how to write a story! The characters and scenario were very realistic, and it was a very hot read overall. I look forward to reading more like it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great

Thanks for the story such a great one. Would love to meet a Terri of my own.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I really enjoyed the first part of the story, but as soon as they got physical you dropped everything else.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I know this story has been out for a few years, but I really hope you do more parts to this. Maybe make it a series.

ShortyMacShortyMacabout 2 years ago

What an awesome love story. I’ve known a few transgendered girls over the years, and I found like our hero that in public men who go with transgendered girl tend to not really show love. A transgendered black girl I met in 2017 when we were both at the Veterans Village for homeless vet was so nice. I really didn’t have a problem saying I loved her 😍 as a human being. We hadn’t had sex till 2021. Up till then Summer would come over to my apt weekly for dinner and a movie. Then about 8 months ago she disappeared. 3 months later she showed up at my apt homeless again and hungry. We sat on the couch talking when she said to me You want to touch it.. Of course I said YES, so she untied the drawstring of her sweatpants and we pulled them down together I said DAMN YOU ARE BIG. She was 8-9 inches and so big around I barley got my hand around it. For the next 45 minutes I spent sucking her. She never did cum. Turned out she was smoking Meth, and that can cause people not to cum. Then I fed her food and gave her my bed and I slept in my Lazy Boy. She spent 6 days with me almost got me in big trouble with my landlord. I was sleeping in the Lazy Boy and she stripped naked and at 3am wrapped in a light blanket was cruising around the halls of the apt building.

I talked to her but it didn’t get thru to her as a couple of days later she was getting ready to do it again only half naked. I finally had to tell her she had to leave. We had a pretty bad blow up and She stormed out tell me I’d never see her again. Hardest thing I’ve ever had to do. I haven’t heard from her since. 😥

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I have read this story about 5 or 6 times, when the song , Hold on came on the radio. This story popped into my head. The part where he finds her on the bathroom floor in an attempted suicide the song fit in so perfectly as if was written for the story. Of course I am rereading the story. It is a too real story which is why it's a great story! ACin SC

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I really was enjoying this sweet story until “Hey! I call you 'gorgeous lady' quite a lot so, no, I did not know you were trans from looking at you”.

This doesn’t say what cis people think it says to trans people and just made me too uncomfortable to finish. It was otherwise a pretty touching story until then.

ColonelinguistColonelinguist17 days ago

Why is it that you Brits and those few European writers who post stories on here, write with so much more wit, punch and realism than our own domestic varieties do? Regardless, your humor made this a lot of fun and a real delight to read; particularly both of their ‘roommate questionnaire.’ Anyone considering That option should equip themselves with one as well.

Based on this one though, I’ll be sampling more of your writing but hopefully one that’s not 6 or more chapters. I find that stories like that tend to reach their climax well before their conclusions and then it’s just down hill from there, as if the author had not quite figured out an ending well before hand - which is always kind of a disappointment.

1Martiniman1Martiniman8 days ago

Absolutely loved this story. Very well written, clever, great characters, a nice length to sink your teeth into and a wonderful premise. A must read! Wished this writer would write more stories in this genre.

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A mature guy who resents the passing of time and the opportunities he missed along the way. I believe in happy endings. January 20th - Sorry but there will be a hiatus of a few months before l can complete The Lab Rats. I have published complete versions of LBFM, Lovers'...