All Comments on 'Love'

by shannon_est

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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I saw the title and thought,

"oh no, not another one,"

and was immediately swallowed

by dark verse filled with pain.

Not my usual favored style,

but it packs a bit of punch.

And then looking further I see

OMG another one - a Southern gal;

what is this, are y'all takin over?

Anyways, a warm Welcome to Lit;

will be looking to see how you develop here.

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyover 18 years ago
Dark and Deep...

Shannon,

The poem is compelling and makes me realize we have a lot in common. Thank you for your words, and sharing them with us. We all have our good days and our bad, the trick is taking the bad and balancing them or overpowering them with the good.

A nice poem and I look forward to more.

RED

dreamer3269dreamer3269over 6 years ago
Awww!

Allow yourself to love others. The rewards are yours. You got a five from me.

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