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The Maid's Tale Ch. 01

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by Hitchhiker10/08/05

This could be very good

With a little bit of eloquence in the style this writer could be very good . Even so a hot little story is in the making.
I get the feeling we could be seeing incest in the future!

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by don8765410/08/05

Intriguing--And Only Natural

Not sure of the "incest" that may happen. But with his wife out of town so to speak for the season, there seems to be a lot of time to get the maid impregnated and well on the way to creating a family between the Master and Maid, at which time the wife may want to go on to other things, or simply come home and be a nanny to the maid's baby.

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by Anonymous02/20/07

Excellent

I love that he left her wanting more; fantastic writing.

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by Anonymous04/13/09

great so far

great start to what clearly has a possibility of long life ahead of it. i just hope it doesn't go the incest route and turn the good memories i have into sour ones. But keep up the good writing!

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