All Comments on 'The Devil Buys My Soul Ch. 01-02'

Good start to the story, I like the character development so far and the one liners are truely funny. Should develop into one hell of a story no pun intended. Keep it up.

I rarely comment on stories I read, but this is trully one of my favorites. Between the relationship the main character has with the devil, the hillarious one liners and good story I couldn't help but like this. I can't wait to see what happens, keep up the good work!

That was easily the best scifi-ish story I've seen on this site since elsol's Master trilogy. I hope to see more of the series!

P.S. I get the feeling you've read "Job, A comedy of Justice" by Heinlein at least once.

Loved the start of what I hope is a long series of stories. Great humour in your writing - keep it up.

I think this plot is really interesting, and I'm definitely looking forward to reading the following chapters. I really enjoyed the way your Devil tempts; I could have sworn the protagonist would have given in once offered the succubi as Sandy, Shelly, and his ex-wife! I also liked how Lilith couldn't get off on "loving" sex. Great work and thanks for sharing!

Hilarious and Hot! Truly imaginative with some very good dialogue and an interesting premise! Well Done!

And I loved Lilith ;-)

I wasn't too sure at first, but I think that this is a great beginning! The banter between the Devil and the main character is funny and sex scenes are great! I'll be sure to read the rest.

this story is fun. nice one Joe

Hehehe. I'm feeling wicked suddenly. Nice diet to lose weight here... Next chapter here I come. PS: my soul is not for sale. ^^