All Comments on 'Anal Tonight'

I really do hope there is more this. I liked the flow and style of your writing.

When he gets loose? He'll be loose indeed! Gaping! - and begging for more...

Can’t wait to read next chapter

You have this starting up very well I hope there is more, does the futa transformation turn guys into futa too?

This really was intended as a one-off short (750 word) story, but I guess it could be the start of something...

I like the idea of him turning into a futa. Can’t wait for more

Did he kill her or divorce her? I assume he sent her to prison for assault, battery, illegal restraint, sodomy and a litany of other charges that would have been simple to prove. And I assume the first thing he did was expose what she had become to all their friends and family? This story had possibilities but was WAY too short.

1 star

Au contraire, mon ami! By the word count, it is one too long!

Advice i have heard for writers: "Show, don't tell." You understand that idea perfectly. Excellent storytelling.

And read your comments I have a couple of thoughts. When she anally rapes him with "her magnificent member" and tears his sphincter muscle to shreds, he'll need emergency surgery to stop the bleeding. She's going to jail. And your setup doesn't work. Even a professional policeman doesn't get both his wrists handcuffed together at once. When he feels one cuff going on, he moves his other hand and is free. Unless she's 200 lbs of MMA fighter and he's 175 lbs of wimp. So this whole scene doesn't happen. Of course some men, when loose, would simply beat her to death......

Poorly thought out and unfinished to boot.

Or has a secret yearning to be dominated that he has been in denial about, but I don't need to tell you that. Loose... there's a fitting word.

I had to give 4 stars, but really I hated it. Total betrayal by her. It should have been 1 ⭐️.

Bill S.

Haha. Poetic.

How odd women can be expected to take anal but a man would be ruined. Hmm.

My guess? Some posters are insecure in their masculinity.