All Comments on 'Little Miss Fifth Period'

by Epithet

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
great ending

The last line is awesome. Way to stay true. Maybe could use a little more description of the girl. Loved the story otherwise.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Really Hot

Really hot; great story; I would love more detail in the sex scenes

More along these lines please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
The ending breaks out of the genre nicely.

Compact, yet suggestive, well-paced first story. Hope to see more from the author soon. There seems to be a lot of talent here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
only one suggestion

Your writing is wonderful, almost exactly what I had hoped. If I could make one tiny difference it would be that he would make her his slave and let her earn her grade that way :P

DeityDeityabout 17 years ago
pretty ok

the best part was the last line.

zex95966zex95966over 15 years ago
heh.

I thought it was one of the hottest stories i've read, and i will favorite it.

I think though that everything could have gone on longer. the tease and the sex. I also would like more detailed descriptions of the girl and everything else.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Sir

I want a master just like you.

PrincessErinPrincessErinalmost 15 years ago
Wow!

This was an amazing story that was so hot and sexy. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
hah

I love it keep writting

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
woooow

The writing was great.I especially love the whole tricking her part i mean, get her to suck u then fuck u all for extra credit only to tell her that you don't give it.Crazy story man.It was wicked

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Proff read what you write

You wrote you riped off her buttons they flew ever where but as she leaves she buttons up her shirt Were you kind enough to sew them back on If so it makes up for you being a low life pervert.

alli1127alli1127almost 10 years ago
oh my god

This is my fantasy. I have always dreamed of teachers fucking me and fucking me so well I turn into a whore. Very well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
perfect..

Wow! That's one of my fantasies... Uhm, I think I'm going to call my boyfriend and tellhm to come fuck the shit out of me.

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