Excellent idea and story line. the spelling, grammar, and story flow need work but um, I'm breathing a little harder over here:-)
hell yeah I would like to see more.
Yeah, I agree that you need a little help with spelling, etc., but otherwise your story was great. It excited me. Did you get excited writing it?
I have eaten and been eaten by a woman while my husband watched. His penis is quite small growing only to 5 inches or so and he loves blowjobs which I don't particularly like to do. I had asked my friend is she would blow him while I ate her and she was open to this. Unfortunately this only happened about 4 times. It was more than 30 years ago. Now he takes different meds, unable to get or keep an erection and now interested in sex at all. So I am left to sex toys. Very frustrating.
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