by JackandJilldo
The title is good but the summary had me moving onto another story, thankfully I recognized the name of the author. It is a good solid story and I am looking forward to seeing how it moves forward.
A good premise, although a little confusing at first, especially the retirement and then only being 11yrs older than Melisa. Cleared up later. There must be more, where does it go?
Great story which leaves me hoping for a continuation. Also, I like reading something especially well written.
I hope you continue this story I would say you can take it places. Another great read.