All Comments on 'Sitting In At Blackjack (In Color)'

This illustrated narrative poem is the culmination of a project covering about 2 years and around 2,000 hours of joyous work. While not expecting to please everyone, it is my sincere hope that it will greatly please someone other than myself, so that I will have shared the joy and love of the work. In creating it, I was guided by the words of Ricky Nelson's song, "Garden Party": "You can't please everyone, so you gotta please yourself." Thanks for reading and looking. HawkerPenn

A fun and pleasurable read.

Enticing illustrations paired with a saucy tale.

Well done!

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Fabulous, funny and sexy. Loved it.

Fabulous poetry and art work. I have had prostate cancer and cannot get an erection yet I chubbed while reading. Felt delicious to feel cock respond to your story.

So clever, so funny, so sexy. Amazing work, amazing imagery, amazing dreams I will have!

Thank you!

Thanks for sharing. I've highlighted your poem in the New Poem Recommendations thread https://forum.literotica.com/threads/new-poem-recommendations.904458/page-29#post-94869785

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very hot!! how about a few hands of Texas Hold Em??? ;)

Amazing in style and imagination. Well done, ‘Hot Wife’!

Innovating and a pleasure to read! Thank you.

So sexy and original!

Such erotic writing and images depicting the sexiness of such a lovely lady!

I've seen what you written

With lust l am smitten

She's, stripped, and fucked most royally

For a poem this good

I'd join in if l could

But l will follow you always most loyally

May l address myself to Penny?

Of all the pictures shown it's true

Two show the real you

A brave woman who's really tough

First when you were newly bare

Second when without a care

You stepped out for home in the buff

You are beautiful and appealing

You send my senses reeling

You are a one in a million girl

I don't want to to be rude

But you look great in the nude

May l see your petals unfurl?

Your heroine is so brave

Your virtue you can't save

You told us you never wanted to win

What you actually won

With your chastity gone

The first day of your new life to begin

Hawker, why can't I save this to my favourites? I have ticked all the boxes!

I just sent you a P.M. about one of your old comments on one of my Amazing Randy stories. As I looked in your favorites list I noticed that you had favorited one of your own...

A quick double click led me on

To a series of portraits you'd drawn,

Revealing artist as well as a poet,

Images, words, cleverly drafted,

It's an epic you've crafted.

I didn't see then; now I know it.

No self-portrait, you say? Someone else in the frame?

If it's not as you claim, could you please send her name?

She may not be you,

But her visage's a clue.

I imagine you're one and the same.

I play cards; wager virtue again.

I'll be much more than glad to sit in,

Split aces or jacks; double down.

Naked, deal the cards all around.

I feel lucky. When you lose I win.

When I win I'll collect.

So creative! So glad I checked.

Thousands of hours of both brush and quill

Kept me reading and looking until

I had finished, smiling, turned-on, and erect.

Hey, this poetry stuff is fun.

Great job!

Very sexy! So talented and beautiful!

Wonderful! Loved it! What an erotic work of art.

i have to get my wife to play strip blackjack

😍 To see more of her, check out 'Penny's pics' here:

https://forum.literotica.com/threads/pennys-pics-consolidating-her-pics-in-one-thread.1564220/

Wow! Amazing! You are indeed a Master Mistress of erotic poetry!!!! The best I’ve read here on Lit!👏👏❤️👏👏

Very erotic art....

Female form is so sexy...

Brill x

So well writen and beautifully illustrated. It certainly was worth the time and effort put into it. It was more than a little titillating and caused me to leak a little.

If I had been writing it, which I don't have the skills to do, I would have allowed Penny to win a hand so she had the chance to savour the naked, muscular chests of her potential lovers raising her excitement and anticipation.

My comment is by no means meant to be a criticism, it is your story, written as you wished and I enjoyed it thoroughly.

Masterful! One of the best I’ve read, and the illustrations weren’t bad either.

what a skill and art to beable to write that and the art work is spot on .. I love it

I am Throbbing So Hard !.

I think we have all had a fantasy of playing strip poker where the lady is the prize won for the constant winning hands. 😉

Color is better, I love ❤️ the verse:)!