All Comments on 'Beautiful Corruption'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

How can I get in touch with sovereign? ;P

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I love the gender neutral hypnotist - very well written, as always!

RubyJGoldmanRubyJGoldmanover 2 years ago

Oh this is lovely, I love the gender neutral sovereign and the brief window this gives into a longer journey

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Amazing writing - would love more of this, but it's also perfect as it is!

kellijane001kellijane001over 2 years ago

this would be so good ... kell

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

More yet.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Well, this is a hot submission story that a woman's mind is slowly being turned in to mindless mush. The idea that she knows what is happening but unable to change the course of her training. Was she someone else important? Did someone else force the change or did she sign up for this? I wonder what kind of story the author could write that brings a woman out of this conditional training so that the woman becomes herself again? Maybe a story written when she comes out of the training after 10 or 15 years?

silverthorne16silverthorne1610 days ago

Would have liked to learn how it all started.

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