All Comments on 'A Stormy Flight and Perfect Landing'

I hope part two of this story is about you and the real Carla and Becky. Not what might have been, but whats really happened. I'll be waiting!

edit missed the mark: Betsy - Becky??

Alright "feedback junkie". Karla and the other one were both mommies, in this fantasy story why didn't you knock one or the both of them up to send home to their hubbies?

no woman would ever refer to her asshole as her shitter.

I'm a fan of your work, but I didn't feel that this was up to the quality of your previous submissions. In the "Christopher" and "Online Predator" series you had much more developed characters and compelling and detailed plot lines. Nothing wrong with a "quickie" every now and then, but I prefer your other material.

There comes a moment in every story where the action has to move from the day to day stuff to the sexual. That transition has to be believable - I think you fail on that. One second we are discussiong the weather and the next we are exchanging bodily fluids doesn't work!

And, of course your dick is two inches longer than the other guy! YAWN!!!

At your age, it would seem that you would have had to have some Viagra. Maybe your impregnated both of these married Bi-sexuals on their ill-fated lay-over?

DAMN !!!!

Shit ! "1*" !!!

Not sure why you wrote such a great story then changed it at the very end to a fantasy..hope you expand on this..

He shares a flight, room and big dick with two MILFs stop use "and", use a comma instead. any pro editor will scold u if u use "and" in a story/book

Liked this story , fast sex nice characters, but keep using the same names throughout it...

Where the hell did the other girl come from?

Poorly edited

Bill

So he's an asshole

Fun.

Becky, Betsy, Beth? All the same girl? Try to be consistent.

No question you did the right thing in sharing that room. It would have been stupid of you not to have done that especially since two sexy sluts were so willing to share it and everything else with you. Shame you couldn't do all those sexy, dirty, pleasurable things with the real Carla and Becky. Hope you're successful some day and if so, you owe us to share that story with us. Best of luck.